Academic Task 1IntermediateBand 7.0–7.5

Line/Bar Chart (Trend) Template

Introduces complex grammatical structures for trends (e.g., "experienced a significant upward trend") and comparative linking words.

Paragraph Structure

Step-by-step breakdown

Introduction

The graph or chart illustrates the fluctuations in Subject over a Number-year period, starting from Year.

Paraphrase the prompt using strong verbs like 'illustrates' or 'demonstrates'.

Overview

Overall, while Category A experienced a significant upward trend, Category B saw a gradual decline. Additionally, Category C remained relatively stable throughout the timeframe.

Use 'while' to contrast two main features in a single sentence. Mention the most striking overall pattern.

Details 1 (Group 1 - Usually upward trends)

Looking at Category A, the figures began at Number and rose sharply to hit a high of Number in Year. Following this peak, there was a slight dip before it recovered to Number.

Group similar data together. Use "Verb + Adverb" (rose sharply) OR "Adjective + Noun" (a sharp rise).

Details 2 (Group 2 - Usually downward/stable trends)

In contrast, Category B started much higher at Number. However, it witnessed a steady downward trend, eventually falling to its lowest point of Number in the final year.

Start with a contrast linker ('In contrast', 'Conversely'). Describe the second group using different vocabulary.

High-Scoring Vocabulary

Plug-and-play phrases

illustrates the fluctuations in... over a Number-year period

Overall, while... experienced a significant upward trend

...saw a gradual decline.

remained relatively stable throughout the timeframe.

rose sharply to hit a high of...

Following this peak, there was a slight dip

witnessed a steady downward trend

eventually falling to its lowest point of...

Sample Answer

Model Band 9.0 Response

Band 9.0

The line graph illustrates the fluctuations in museum attendance for two distinct institutions in London over a five-year period, starting from 2010. Overall, while the History Museum experienced a significant upward trend in visitors, the Art Museum saw a gradual decline. By the end of the period, the History Museum had overtaken the Art Museum to become the most popular. Looking at the History Museum, the figures began at 20,000 visitors and rose steadily for three years. In 2013, attendee numbers surged to hit a high of 50,000 in the final year, 2015. In contrast, the Art Museum started much higher at 40,000 visitors. However, it witnessed a steady downward trend over the next five years. Following a brief period of stability between 2010 and 2012, numbers plummeted, eventually falling to its lowest point of just 15,000 in the final year.

Common Mistakes

Traps to avoid

Poor grouping of data

Describing Line A from 2000-2010, then Line B from 2000-2010, then Line A from 2010-2020 is confusing.

Fix: Describe the WHOLE journey of Line A in one paragraph, then the WHOLE journey of Line B in the next paragraph.

Mixing up 'to' and 'by'

Grammar mistake: 'It increased to 10%' means the new total is 10%. 'It increased by 10%' means you add 10 to the old number.

Fix: Be very careful. Usually, you describe the end point: 'It rose TO 50,000'.

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