Task 2BeginnerBand 5.5–6.0

Advantages & Disadvantages Template

A clear, two-part structure listing the good points in one paragraph and the bad points in the next.

Paragraph Structure

Step-by-step breakdown

Introduction

Many people now Topic. There are both good and bad things about this. In this essay, I will look at the advantages and disadvantages.

State the topic simply and tell the examiner you will discuss both sides.

Body Paragraph 1 (Advantages)

The main advantage is Benefit. For example, Simple Example. This is very helpful for people because Reason.

State one big advantage. Give a simple example and explain why it helps.

Body Paragraph 2 (Disadvantages)

However, there are also disadvantages. The biggest problem is Drawback. This can cause Negative Result. For instance, Example.

State one big disadvantage using 'However' to show contrast. Explain the negative result.

Conclusion

In conclusion, Topic has both positives and negatives. But I think the advantages are more important than the disadvantages.

Summarize and quickly state which side is stronger (if the prompt asks for your opinion).

High-Scoring Vocabulary

Plug-and-play phrases

There are both good and bad things about this.

In this essay, I will look at...

The main advantage is...

This is very helpful for people because...

However, there are also disadvantages.

The biggest problem is...

This can cause...

In conclusion...

Sample Answer

Model Band 9.0 Response

Band 9.0

Many people now work from home instead of going to an office. There are both good and bad things about this. In this essay, I will look at the advantages and disadvantages of this new way of working. The main advantage is saving time and money. For example, people do not need to drive cars or take trains to the city every morning. This is very helpful for families because parents have more free time to spend with their children after finishing work. Furthermore, companies save money because they do not buy big offices. However, there are also disadvantages. The biggest problem is that people can feel lonely. This can cause sadness because workers do not talk face-to-face with their friends at the office. For instance, a person working alone in their bedroom all week might become depressed or bored. In conclusion, working from home has both positives like saving time, and negatives like feeling lonely. But I think the advantages are more important because having extra time with family is the most important thing.

Common Mistakes

Traps to avoid

Mixing pros and cons

Putting an advantage in the disadvantage paragraph ruins the Coherence score.

Fix: Keep BP1 strictly positive and BP2 strictly negative.

Ignoring the 'Do advantages outweigh disadvantages?' question

If the prompt asks this, and you just list pros or cons without concluding which is stronger, you fail the Task Response.

Fix: Always state clearly in the introduction and conclusion whether the pros or the cons 'win'.

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