Advantages & Disadvantages Template
A highly analytical format that evaluates the profound societal impact of a trend, arguing convincingly why the merits eclipse the complications.
Paragraph Structure
Introduction
Provide a sophisticated introduction using academic phrasing ('sparked a global conversation', 'substantial and far-reaching').
Body Paragraph 1 (Analysis of Benefits)
Analyze the benefits rather than just listing them. Focus on 'empowerment' or 'transformation' at a macro (societal) level.
Body Paragraph 2 (Evaluation of Drawbacks)
Acknowledge the drawbacks ('Admittedly...'), but immediately minimize their power by arguing they are 'transitory' (temporary) or manageable.
Conclusion
Deliver a powerful concluding sentence using strong operative verbs like 'eclipsed'.
Useful Phrases
Sample Band 9 Answer
Common Mistakes to Avoid
Failing to 'weigh' the sides
Band 9 isn't just saying 'A is good, B is bad'. You must explain *why* A's goodness is mathematically or logically larger than B's badness.
Over-generalizing the cons
Saying 'technology is bad for everyone's health' is an unsupported absolute.
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